Looking at both of your tasks, I was able to feel that you have a strong personal style in the way you draw and the use of color. You explored many techniques and materials in the task, so I can see not only your painting skills, but also your expertise in collage and photoshop. I really love the mark making you did with acrylic paint in task 2, a large amount of dark colors mixed with a small amount of gold and light green give the painting a visual impact, and the overlapping paint and texture left by the brush make the painting more detailed and vivid.
In addition, the painting of fruit stall in your task1 is also very lovely. Different colors of fruits are grouped together to make the picture full and harmonious, which is suitable for further exploration and making the pattern.
However，there are several paintings in task1 that would be better with some improvements. For example, the painting of the watermelon, its composition is a bit unreasonable, the blank area of the painting is too large, it feels unfinished. You can try replacing white paper with colored paper for painting, or use your mark making as a bottom layer to paint on. Overall，good job！I look forward to seeing your art work next time！
2nd November 2022 @ 4:44 pm
Looking at both of your tasks, I was able to feel that you have a strong personal style in the way you draw and the use of color. You explored many techniques and materials in the task, so I can see not only your painting skills, but also your expertise in collage and photoshop. I really love the mark making you did with acrylic paint in task 2, a large amount of dark colors mixed with a small amount of gold and light green give the painting a visual impact, and the overlapping paint and texture left by the brush make the painting more detailed and vivid.
In addition, the painting of fruit stall in your task1 is also very lovely. Different colors of fruits are grouped together to make the picture full and harmonious, which is suitable for further exploration and making the pattern.
However，there are several paintings in task1 that would be better with some improvements. For example, the painting of the watermelon, its composition is a bit unreasonable, the blank area of the painting is too large, it feels unfinished. You can try replacing white paper with colored paper for painting, or use your mark making as a bottom layer to paint on. Overall，good job！I look forward to seeing your art work next time！